42. Errors in Word Order

Most word-order errors in Written Expression consist of two words in reverse order. Some of the most common examples of this type of error are given below:

Error Example Correction
Noun + adjective drivers careful careful drivers
Noun + possessive clothing women\’s women\’s clothing
Main verb + auxiliary finished are are finished
Adjective + adverb a basic extremely idea an extremely basic idea
Verb + subject Tell me where is it. Tell me where it is.
(in an indirect question or other wh- clause) I spoke to John when was he here. I spoke to John when he was here.
Preposition/adverb clause marker + adverb after immediately immediately after
Participle + adverb baked freshly bread freshly baked bread
Relative pronoun + preposition the house which in she lives the house in which she lives
adverb, adjective, or quantifier + almost totally almost
late almost
all almost
almost totally
almost late
almost all
enough + adjective* enough good good enough

*Enough can correctly be used before nouns: enough money, enough time. Enough may also be used before an adjective when the adjective comes before a noun. (There weren\’t enough good seats at the concert.)

Sample Items

Goods (A) such as flower fresh (B) and seafood (C) are often shipped (D) by air.

(A) Goods
(B) flower fresh
(C) seafood
(D) often shipped

The answer is (B) because the adjective fresh must come before the noun flowersfresh flowers.

Visitors to Vancouver often comment (A) on how beautiful (B) its setting is (C) and on how clean is it (D).

(A) often comment
(B) how beautiful
(C) setting is
(D) is it

The answer is (D) because the correct word order is subject + verb: it is.

Exercise 42.1

Exercise 42.2